>>21075
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The truth is- (Is this a hyphen? It looks a little short to be an emdash. Try setting the character width for the hyphen to 200% [assuming you're using Photoshop].)
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Panel 4: Replace the vertical line in the balloon in the upper-right with an ellipsis.
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What's making me feel so floaty? (The one-word line "so" sticks out like a sore thumb, but I'm not sure what you could do about it. Would it look better if every word was on its own line ["What's/making/me/feel/so/floaty"]?)
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Seeing this on the page, this looks a little weird to me. I would try putting more space between the two lines, or making the first letter of "buoyed" lowercase. Maybe both.
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It's harder than you might think..! -> It's harder than you might think...! (three periods in ellipsis)
enough already. -> Enough, already. (capitalize "Enough," add comma)