Translation for Cotton Candy part 1 (of 3)

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https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoNVFOUTRMTEYtOGs
adding the credits later

>>21183

If anyone could translate the first page, that'd be great. Otherwise, everything looks good to me. Good job. And sorry about the wait. School's been a pain.

>>21196

Here's my take:

みてるとふわふわ、触るとぺたぺた。
Fluffy to look at, sticky to the touch.
「すき」と「嫌」が交錯する。
"Love" and "hate" blending together.
”わたあめ”みたいな、この気持ち。
This cotton candy-like feeling.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoWHR4MlVHVTAzUk0

>>21200

Other than the two untranslated sfx on the second page, can you erase page numbers? All good otherwise.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoWHR4MlVHVTAzUk0

>>21223

On page 18, when you colored over the page number, it looks like you used a different shade of black. Can you match the color with the rest of the panel?

>>21231 fixd

>>21242

Looks good.

>>21223
Released.