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She was able to avoid it with a sudden pheonix tance! -> She was able to avoid it with a sudden pheonix stance! (tance -> stance)
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> Movement's vs. Movements
"Movement's", a contraction of "movement is", is consistent with fighting game parlance here. "Movement" is the part of the game where you manipulate your position (closely related to "spacing," makign sure you end up in the right place). Shijou is critiquing Mino's performance in this particular area.
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You should think only about what you wanna do during a match! -> You can't think only about what you wanna do during a match! (should -> can't. Shijou is saying that you thinking about your own intentions and nothing else will not result in victory. You should NOT think only about what you want to do; you must also think about what your opponent wants to do. The path to victory isn't in deciding what you want to do, but catching on to what your opponent is doing to do so you can anticipate it and counter it.)
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Part of the ガ that straddled the gutter between panels 2 and 3 is still present in panel 2, covering part of Shijou's hair.
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"To stuff a move" is jargon. You "stuff" your opponent's move if you hit your opponent through her move without getting hit yourself. This, in contrast to a trade, where you hit your opponent through her move, but get hit yourself. Mino sees ZTT through out a move, then does one of her own to hit her out of it, stuffing ZTT's side-step sweep.
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If you can just remember the timing, then if you use buffering, the input itself is easy. -> Once you've got the timing down, if you use buffering, the input itself is easy.
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> スイ
swsh
> アアア
aaaaaagh (you guessed right)
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How'd she manage to get in my head like that... -> How'd she manage to get in my head like that...? (add question mark; check the margins in this bubble, they seem a little tight)
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> Yeah, Mino-chan, you are pretty great.
Embolden and italicize "are"
I realized the other day that I've been translating 二択 as "fifty-fifty" every time I see it, but I should instead be favoring the more widely-used term "mixup." Like, when Shijou says, "throw a mid-low fifty-fity," it's much more natural to hear "mid-low mixup." I'd like to start replacing instances of "fifty-fifty" with "mixup," but "fifty-fifty" is well-enough established by now that it would be weird to start calling it something else. But it's not so late that we can't start introducing the term. I would like your opinion: do you think we should go back and replace some instances of "fifty-fifty" with "mixup," slowly start introducing the term here in chapter 6, or just switch from "fifty-fifty" to "mixup" wholesale and act like nothing's different?
Thank you, and I'm sorry for my late realization of my mistakes.
