Woot! If there's a link to raws, I'll look through it. I like what I have seen so far of the series, though.

>>25935
The link is the poster's name.

Thx. It's a super sweet story. I'll have to brush up on my kansai dialect, take my time and do it right.

Really sweet, slow burn story. Refreshing change from endless variations of school girl stuff. I like this project a lot.

>>26007
Nice. I hope someone will pick it up coz this looks easy to edit.

Took a quick look, and this seems like a wonderful project to try out while on break. Only a couple panels looked like they'd be any trouble. Consider me signed up as editor for chapter 1, if that's alright.
I can barely keep up with reading manga during the semester, so probably won't be able to continue editing past chapter 1.

Thanks! Any and all help appreciated.

>>26029
Any progress on this one?

>>26059
I got a lot done quickly, but my progress dragged when I got to typesetting. Wish I had got more finished, but it is what it is. I'm headed back to college tomorrow, so here's my current progress if anyone wants to complete it! https://mega.nz/file/ZL81AQSY#Fl8oTSMXaOXQjDpwNJi2stl8MCHnvucYRgJs6z0Snlo
Heads up, I didn't redraw the sign on page 13, and I added a "!" after "Hey" on page 35.

Anyone who picks this up can feel free to change anything, but the fonts I was using were:
Clementine - normal text
Hooteroll - thought bubbles/boxes
Inter - TV subtitles (a font actually in use as such)
Digital Delivery - Hanayo's husband's hallucinated voice
DK Bygone - Riko's blocky "A New Love" line
Brianne's hand - some sfx

Thanks for all your work. Hope that someone picks it up.

>>26092
https://mega.nz/file/8mI3RCKQ#ASIMQPOEeWK79nIfwtbB_ZL1py4G2Miu2rT8o5-sB9g
I'm not planning to do the rest, but this was too cute. Also took some liberties with punctuaction.
First time posting so apologize for some possible mistakes.

Most of these QC notes require a boke review. They're all suggestions, in the end. Hit me up on discord if you want to discuss any of them, or I can send over pics from the big book o' dialects I use for this sort of stuff.

>>26101

Thanks for the very detailed PR. If it's punctuation/grammar level stuff, feel free to change without my input.

As for the other suggestions:

6f1
The sentence is kind of clunky, would "What's brining this up, Riko-chan?" work?

YES

6f4

As such, I suggest changing the two Ahs here to I

YES - It will need to be changed in a lot of lines through the TL.

7f3
I suggest changing this to 'S that true, Gran?

YES

11f4

Use —> Who you gettin’

12f2
I suggest to change ta -> to and yah -> you

YES

13f1
I suggest changing both Ah -> I

YES

13f2
Ah -> I
To offset the changes, I suggest shortening more -ing words, so for here changing thinking to thinkin’

YES

13f3
Ah'll -> I’ll

YES

13f4
Maybe buying -> buyin’

YES

15f2
Maybe to What am I even sayin’?

YES

15f4
Ah -> I
Looking -> lookin’

YES

16f1
Ah-> I x2

YeS

16f2
Ah-> I
yah -> you
Mah -> my
The "my" part in particular because this style isn't used on any other pages

YES

18f1
I suggest changing "no pressure" to something else since it's a relatively new phrase and not something an older character would be likely to say
It's a good spot to fit some kind of old phrase, without it being a forced idiom, but I'm having trouble finding something good

—> It’s free to look. —or— Look as long as you’d like.

19f2
I suggest changing "Naw" to "Well"
Naw itself kind of sounds weird, but well keeps the hesitance

—> Keep as is

19f3
Ah -> I

YES

20f2
t -> at
Remove the apostrophe (otherwise it must be moved to the other side of the t)
This is because the apostrophe would go where the letter is removed and "no trouble 't all" doesn't quite look/sound right

YES

22f3
yah -> you
In particular because this woman already says "you" a lot

YES

22f4
Ah'm -> I'm x2

YES

23f1
I suggest changing "extravagant" to "lavish"
Totally just a character voice suggestion, extravagant seems off for her to use. But maybe not?

—> I’m fine with this change, but Yoshiko is college educated, so she has a more extensive vocabulary that Hanayo, and can switch to standard Japanese on demand.

23f5
Ah -> I

YES

24f2
Ah -> I

YES

26f4
I suggest changing "nah" to "No no,”

YES

26f5
Ah've -> I’ve

YES

27f1
Lay that color on me is super casual/modern, which is maybe what you're going for here. It's got some cringe to it, which might be the original intent. If not, I'd suggest finding a different idiom.

—> I’ll take that color, please. —or— Pretty me up, please.

33f1
Ah -> I

YES

33f2
Ah -> I
Maybe change treating to treatin’

YES

33f3
Ah -> I

YES

34f1
Ah'll -> I'll x2
Ah -> I

YES

34f3
Ah -> I x2

YES

I suggest removing "in the head"
It seems a bit extra

—> Leave original

35f1
Ah -> I

YES

35f2
Ah'll -> I'll
I suggest changing "I tweaked my back" to "A crick in my back"
Tweaked is a very new word
Could even work as just "My lumbago", both crick and lumbago are sufficiently old person

YES. Lumbago feels too old even for Hanayo.

35f3
Ah -> I
You and yer is inconsistent here, I suggest changing them all to You/your/you’re

YES

36f1
Ah -> I
Ya -> You
You and ya is inconsistent here too so I suggest going entirely with you

YES

36f4
Ah -> I x2
Ah'm -> I'm
Maybe offerings to offerin's

YES

Oh god I talk about my lumbago. I'm old D:

>>26103

Wonder if it's regional. My gran talked about her rheumatism. And I'm closing in on old...

https://mega.nz/file/BzhQzaQb#eFCuL5aaxPczLHLfjhk4e1FBKmbEO9a7Tc_0sIkIx2k
First (?) batch of QC notes applied

I looked it over and found two small things on 13 and 18, sent those over to Raida. After that, looks good to me. Who does the uploading for yuri project?

>>26112
schuyguy

Here's the finished version. Ready for release

https://mega.nz/file/92gDQahb#6hb4wFi2byWVhr2Kjkg7zg3EyIwd9AY_thGZNc143zk

>>26126

I don't think this is ready for release yet. Just looking through the first few pages, I already see some issues with lines. On page 6, "What's bringing this up?" just reads as very awkward. I think you might say, "What brought this up?" or "What's got you bringing this up?" or "Why are you bringing this up?"

On page 10, that line "Watch out for a lifestyle that watches too much tv and doesn't exercise". I understand what it means, but it just isn't something anyone would say. Maybe something like "Watch out for a lifestyle where you watch too much tv and don't exercise".

And then page 13, I see what you're going for with the colloquialisms, but "I betcha" doesn't work. There's no "you" for the "I bet you". "You betcha" can be inserted into dialogue like that, but only really in conversations. "It's been an age, I bet" would work, but the "betcha" really does change the meaning.

>>26132

No problem with any of the suggestions.

One last formal QC from our end that includes schuyguy's notes for ease of implementing. Definitely missed a critical your and ya! From Saga, this time.

p6f1b2: change to "Why're you bringing this up, Riko-chan?"
p6f2b2: change to "Find a new love."
p9f3: "for a healthy life tomorrow." -> "for a healthy future."
p10f1caption: change first sentence to "Avoid a lifestyle of too much TV and too little exercise."

P13f1b1 to "It's been an age, I bet."

p16f2bottomtext: change to "Like a turd on a shoe"
p22f3b4: "If you have written" -> "If you've written"
p23f1b1 "life story" -> "life's story" (for consistency with p22)
p25f3b1: can probably change "heck" to "hell"; "hell" is pretty mild and "heck" is noteworthy when coming from an adult regardless of context or setting
p29f3b1: "are going to go" -> "will go"
p33f1b2: "if you'd like it" -> "if you'd like"
p3f1b1: "thing are" -> "things are"
p3f1b2: "I'll read this by" -> "I'll read this for"
p35f3b2: "Your" -> "You're"
p36f1b2: "fend for yourself!" -> "make it yourself!"
p36f1b3: remove comma after baby
p36f4b1: change comma after once to period
credits: change first sentence to "Avoid a lifestyle that lacks yuri nutrients and exercise."

https://mega.nz/file/RvIUiDSR#mcW7mov_OGzQJ0LX4TOj41Ga4sH115IzpxFIOWHub_A
Another qc batch bites the dust

Released. Good work everyone!

Based on PR feedback, I have dialed down some of the accents on the characters. A couple other small typo fixes and other minor changes for chapter two on.

https://mega.nz/file/NjYhCZRQ#pL7wNOMey3hgu3u6nkjKL3KSsfsXb8hRjvjoZryMARY
I have completed chapter 2 tsing.

Here's a QC from Saga and myself for chapter 2

https://mega.nz/file/Mm5ElayB#sMsLkAjMld3Oruk8q-OlZI9VJwu7KGUXeqvk3aNsRjA
First batch of QC applied to chapter 2. Added page 64 and a credits page.

https://mega.nz/file/87p3XK7C#yABysAh9WuoB6ABukUnLqsNl2BEIUjd5jfu79ceDr2M
Chapter 2 QC ended from Altair and Saga side

https://mega.nz/file/M2gGWQyK#OwMIDJayhUGJ6OAlYwC8br_eMpvPqIFsp3QPSEEGZnU
Additionally, chapters 3, 4 and 5 are ready for QC

I think I need a bit of clarification. Who is Poppa? (should that be Papa?) Is that Keita, her father-in-law, her father, or someone else entirely? Is Keita her husband or one of her kids?

>>26297

I might need to you quote me the page number, but if I remember right it's Hanayo talking to her husband. He's never named, and they call each other "mother" and "father" or "momma" and "poppa"

It should be ready to release now.
https://mega.nz/file/E2wXCSZK#8nY4U8m5EkzCpIfYfOGc-QMCnqv-WDlPmVEMhS8x2LA

>>26320

Released.

Yay! The credits page made me laugh. Nice work, everyone.

I was so excited to see more of this translated I came over to thank the people who did it. thank you so much!!

Thank you for the second chapter! Been looking forward to reading more of this series. Excited for the next chapter!

Appreciate the kind words. This is sweet story!

for posterity, here is a total collection of the QC notes for ch3

I love it so much, thank you! My old lady gays ♪
I hope it will be continued T_T

I updated chapter 3 as per the QC, and I’m goïng to go ahead and upload to Dynasty and MD.

If you can implement the QC fixes, we'll go and QC the rest as well.

One quick thing, could you add SagaTympana to the chapter 3 QC credits? Thanks!

Hello! I'm BaganLee the admin over at Hyakuro Translations and one of our translator shown an interested on this series (Hanamonogatari) and we've started working on the latest chapter you released (chapter 03).
We don't want to get in the way of anything, so I would like to ask if you are planning to fully commit on this series or if it was a one-off release because you had the chapter in limbo for the past year or so, and if that's the case we hope to start working on the series ourselves.

Thank you!

>>26989

Thanks for checking in. Yuri Project is not a group per se, it works more like /u, so people drop in and drop out. However, I think there is new life in the project right now, and I’ll ask the editors about their commitment.

As for me, I have already translated all of Vol 01, and plan to TL the rest.

>>26990

I thought that Yuri Project was an actually group for the longest, but I guess as long we live we learn^^
Okay, please do! I'll wait for your message so I can inform our translator as well; not really a big fun of getting in the way of anyone's work or even getting into any "uncomfortable" situation from something I didn't properly checked.

Editor here – I’m committed to this series, yes, I’ll finish off this volume, then once boke posts TL will edit the rest.

>>26990
>>26994
Alright, I think that settles it, thank you for the prompt replies the both of you!
I'll let me team know as well on your decision.

Good luck!

>>26995

And thanks for checking in. Really appreciate it.

>>26997
You're welcome!

Sorry about the mixup and dragging our feet, BaganLee!

Here are the QC notes for chapter 4. We'll get working on chapter 5 notes now. Ping me with any questions or clarifications

Okay, chapter 4 is uploaded!

here is the first part of the QC by me and SagaTympana. I'll get the second part up soon, it was a long one

here is the second half of the QC for chapter 5

okay, done!! that completes volume 1. once the raws + TL are posted for volume 2 I’ll get on it (can be on this thread or a different one)

>>27023

I'll get started on Vol 2 then.