Hanamonogatari 05-2 QC_aS

p151f1b3: is this empty on purpose?
Looks like the original is "…Ha." so I suggest "Oh…"

p151f3b1: ah -> I
p151f4b3: 30 -> thirty
Here in particular should be consistent with b2, but generally should be consistent throughout. Previous edits will make it so

152f1 - 30 -> thirty
Does. -> does, and she's
152f2 - comma after "house" to a period; 40 -> forty

153f3 - I shouldn't -> should I have

154f3 - XX women's -> that women's
And he works at XX -> He works at that
XX's women's community college -> that community college

p155f2b1: add an ellipsis after "me"

p156f3b2: Was -> was // it's -> its
p156f3b1: ok -> okay

p160f3b3: Worry -> worry

162f1 - period after "of course"
p162f2b4: ok? -> okay?

p163f2b1 and f3b2: I feel like we ran into this with an earlier chapter, but should these both be the same? 
Update! Ayako is the one, so please change Asako in f3 to Ayako

p164f3b2: Masami -> Mayumi

p166p3l1: they have had -> they've led

p166p3l3: They meet -> they meet