Content warning: Sweet, low drama story - drama addicts run for the hills; Includes hand holding, so buckle in; When a minimalist collides with a closet stuffer, who is going to win long term?

All right, let me help with this one. The pages seems pretty clean. I can spot moderate amounts of redrawings to do~

I will be posting for review later. You may contact us through our discord https://discord.com/users/567151599735013386 if anything comes up.

Thank you ^^

Thanks for taking this on!

np ^^

Also, lunae lily forgot to ask: would chu prefer the original onomatopoeia removed or not?

>>27047

Personally, I like it when the SFX are redrawn, but it's up to the editor

No worries: time to redraw everything! ~<3

Heya! ^~^

Here we go~

Also, lunae lily would like to have more info about chur preferences about credits page, so she can start making one already~<3

Thanks! ^^

>>27052

Again it's editor preference. Some people drop translator notes or gags in the credits, but plain vanilla is fine too.

But something like:

Yuri Project has plenty of projects looking for volunteers
https://safe.yuri-project.net/wakaba.html

is requested.

Here are a variety of examples:

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_fairy_tales_ch01#19

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/hanamonogatari_ch05#43

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/the_ennui_of_being_an_egg#62

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/my_cute_little_kitten_ch19#17

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/how_my_favorite_beautiful_girl_told_me_she_loved_me_ch04#21

Hello, just one small suggestion: It seems the name of the artist is Konayama Kata (not Konoyama), and here is their page on Dynasty: https://dynasty-scans.com/authors/konayama_kata

Thank you.

>>27057

Thanks for catching that!

Right! ^^

May lunae lily have the names of the TL, Raw provider and anyone else (with their role)? Just to be sure no one ish missing~

QC attached. Well done on all the redrawing work, it was a joy to read :)

Since the raw provider is anonymous, you don’t need to credit them, but you can if you want.

What a nice QC! It was fun fixing everything~

Please let mih know if chu need any other adjustment (or maybe the same that is not good enough yet)

Thanks! ^~^

03/6: Missing the “room…?” part?
04/3: The narration text could be a little larger?
15: Line spacing not updated

Loving the credits page btw

Glad you like it~ ^^

Sorry about the mistakes. Take a look now, please~

All good! Looks ready for upload to me.

Oh by the way, try to avoid uploading from those JPEGs, because then you end up with three levels of compression:

1. the original raws are in JPEG format;
2. JPEG compression happens when you export to JPEGs;
3. sites like Dynasty Reader compress it again server-side.

So it’s usually better to use a lossless format like PNG for keeping the edited raws, because compressing multiple times is not a great idea.

that was really my bad. if chu want, lunae lily can resend the files in .png