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763722 No.25415  

One-shot, 16 pages.

https://mega.nz/folder/cKR0ERya#DCQrp_AEluXqpyvBdrDZYA

>> No.25600  
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Here is the translation for this story. It seems to be a continuation of the story found here.

>>25425

>> No.26292  

>>25415

This one looks nice. I'm currently editing this.

>> No.26714  

Almost a year late... Whoops.
https://mega.nz/file/sUkSWQ7T#KsPOyY56JL4FWM5BRjC_0FSgh9LZuOnb1A4t99WvTWE

Now waiting for PR/QC.

This story is a continuation of this one: https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/becoming_cute_becoming_clean

>> No.26727  

>>26714

Good work! Just a few minor concerns.

-4.5
Music note is overlapping text

-6.3
"カパ" - missing sfx

-15.1
"うっうっ" - untranslated sfx (i think)

>> No.26728  

>>26727

-6.3
"カパ" - missing sfx = Pop

-15.1
"うっうっ" - = Wah Wah



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