Hi, I've worked on this. Drpepperfan from dynasty-scans was kind enough to help me out with a good QC as well, he had two unresolved comments that I'll paste at the end.
I had a lot of difficulty with the book's text, I couldn't figure out any way to improve it, really. All QC is very welcome, thanks very much!
QC Download: http://www.mediafire.com/file/grtc9d9o3amrrgt/Miniature_Garden_Cosmos_Chapter_9_%2528QC%2529.zip/file
drpepperfan's thoughts:
Frequent use of Dote feels odd, could do with some alternatives thrown in.
12: Text in 3rd and 4th panels seems off, may need a translation redo.