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One-shot. 28 pages.
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/?d2jrjcaa9qikl4k
TL: http://www.mediafire.com/?kq59xfd08f72he0

>>	musicgod96 19/03/30(Sat)02:30 ID:feaoU8Gg No.23306 Cleans https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/166ql5ZS-btMBhb7C0s-J9uz57fuZ_S40?usp=sharing

Translation boke 23/02/25(Sat)18:12 ID:jVZIvV0f No.26237
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I raise dead yuri stories from the grave. I am the yuri necromancer. Trigger warning: Suicidal ideation. Content warning: disposable pop girls, professional tsundere, fear the airhead.

>>	Editing puppy 23/02/28(Tue)16:05 ID:W5Cg9CC/ No.26259 Editing complete here too. https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1BzFDPj8QCQkvWfO7sivWBLvGw4z_2Ret

Martin 23/03/10(Fri)02:01 ID:DD8Dcn+9 No.26301

>>26259
Just a few minor things and it should be good editing wise.
265.4
"[...] but mayu you're so slim and super[...]" maybe increase the tracking on the L in "slim"? Kinda reads like "sum" atm.
266.1
"You totally messed up the dance! You spaced it off again. Again!" Should this be "spaced off"?
274.1
"You give up waytoo easily." -> "You give up way too easily."

>>	boke 23/03/10(Fri)10:35 ID:jVZIvV0f No.26302 >>26301 266.1 "You totally messed up the dance! You spaced it off again. Again!" Should this be "spaced off"? --> you could use "Spaced out" or any similar phrase.

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