TL here.
>>4204
Actually, one of my motivations for redoing typesetting was that the typesetter took significant unwarranted liberties with my translation and I'm not really down with that. The spelling was also all over the place.
If I make a blatant mistake with my spelling, grammar, or translation, or if there's poor flow that can be fixed by rewording something, then that's cool. I would prefer not to have substantial changes without justification, however.
>>4208
I agree; if you have better raws available that would be great. It was especially annoying that one page of ch01 actually crops off some dialogue (what Nabe-chan says when she sees Vega and Washimine kissing for the first time.)
I'll be posting the TL of ch02 in this thread sometime within the next 24 hours.