Content warning: Mm, yeah, don't date co-workers; When you throw away an angel, do they go in regular garbage, recycling or compost?; Imagine being kicked out of heaven for being gay - surely that's not a metaphor for something?

I’m working on this one.

Wootie!

this was good :)

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1PyO0574MVeofPWW1OJslzBgHfa4ruLD1

General note: Did you intend to use Chinacat for the dialog? I noticed it was used for dialog, thoughts, and narration.

Pg9 pn4: Bubbles are off. "Who?" goes in the second bubble, "C'mon..." third bubble, "What bar..." etc in fourth bubble.
Pg11 pn3: font change mid sentence?
Pg11 pn3: Missing ellipses after "and he kicked me outside..."
Pg11 pn5: "tongue" is misspelled
Pg16 pn3: missing comma between "them" and "it"
Pg17 pn4: font change?
Pg20 pn4: Capitalize "Y"
Pg27 pn3: missing comma after "where"

Make sure you denote "smoking" tag when submitting to Dynasty. Already know dmitry won't want to read this one.

I did intend to use Chinacat for dialogue, but if you think that it’s better to use a different font then I’m happy to, I’m just not familiar with how it “should” be done (also, font recommendations would be appreciated :D).

re 27/3: I don’t like how a comma reads there, but I put ellipses and that should be better?

I typically use Wild Words for dialogue, Chinacat for narration, Zud Juice for thoughts, and augie for handwriting. That's what's recommended in the how-to guides I've read, since you can get free versions of each.

re 27/3 yes, that reads better

Looks like another version got upload to MD: https://mangadex.org/title/be3a9631-4775-4dc4-8dde-a761b71bfa68/koko-ha-tengoku-ja-nai-kedo

>>26843

Yeah, that's Kirin's version. It's no problem to finish this up and upload it. He knew I was translating it before he started on it.

Sorry it took a while, but I finally finished this up. I found another font I liked (Edu SA Beginner) and changed narration to use it. I’ve sent the upload request to Dynasty now, and will upload to MD.