Content warning: of course you're jealous of the pussy, an open hand slap is an intro to the real world of old school maid power dynamics, and who needs to date when you have the blue swan of destiny?

In QC one thing was brought up as a bit confusing.

1. On page 139 it says "But this assignment this time is adult women, so…"

Which is a bit confusing because Ana is an adult woman. So we are confused about what disqualifies her from being the model this time.

A better TL might be:

"But the assignment this time is mature women, so..."

Ok, I understand now.

Another thing JQ and I discussed was not really about the script, but more about that plot. It doesn't really make sense to us. Primarily around two things.

1. On page 155 she says "There’s no way I can win…" even though she just realized Amamiya is not flirting with Misa. Does she instead think Misa is flirting with Amamiya instead?
2. On page 165 she says to herself "Today…Just happens to be your day, right Sakura-san?" What else happened today? Does she start crushing on Amamiya herself now? If so it's not really shown later.

Idk it just feels like I'm missing something when I read it. Idk if there's something lost in translation or that's just how it is.

I'll post the chapter here later for you to check the proof-reading changes as well.

Here's the final result that I think you should look at for sign-off, boke.

>>26685

"There’s no way I can win…" My take on this is that is the self hatred because she can't bring herself to confess and that's causing her all the petty emotions she mentioned.

h"Today…Just happens to be your day, right Sakura-san?" - she's referring to the pre-recorded radio broadcast that Sakura does that just started playing at that moment.

It looks good to me, thanks for all the hard work!

PNG optimized, zipped, and credits added.

For someone who may be uploading:

Author: Karuha
Tags: Adult Life, Yuri, Office Lady
Anthology: Qualia: Envy

Awesome! Great looking release