Okay, found the missing pages. Stupid Google.
Pg5 pn2: Capitalize "Incoming"
Pg22 pn4: "...living with Jun was" needs punctuation. Ellipses would probably work.
Pg29 pn2: This reads weird. Should this say "And, it's not like I only love MEN either"? She's talking about why she's not refuting being a lesbian. So in her mind, she justifying why keeping the label is okay, since she's living with a lesbian, AND she doesn't only love men.