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Page 02. Second panel. This is a slight mistranslation of the subject. Hikaru-chan here is refering to the cats, saying "[their lovey-dovey time] kinda lacks mood". Her small text reads "it's different than what I'd imagined".
Then, Mao-chan replies "it's cuz they're animals after all".
Page 03. Third panel. I would keep the ? in good evening, since it adds more to the mood.
Also, you should switch my to your in the last box. The last bubble before that used ...your guard down, so the pronouns have to agree.
Page 07. Last panel. Want->wanted .
That is all.