>>26027
Looks nice.
On page 8, bottom right panel, I forgot to redraw parts of the cloud, so you can see a white space left for the text "The nearest...". You can try to redraw the clouds or move the text up, so it will fill the white space.
On page 17, center panel, I didn't redraw the heairlines on the right side of her head, so they look cut off. Try to redraw them or place the "THUMP" sfx in the way, it will hide them.