>>25437
Just a few very minor things:
p2
"that would hatch into a little bird[...]" Might help to move up a few pixels.
"given into / my curiosity / and peeled / open the / shell." -> "given / into my / curiosity / and peeled / open the / shell."
p4
panel 2 - Aside text "Well,". The comma here is getting lost in the background. I think the options are either to increase the stroke, or move the text around so it's not in the dots. Up to you which would work better.
