I'll get on this soon.

>>24100

Is this soon?

At any rate, I wanted to draw attention to one portion that seemed fairly strange to me:

> [9/16 (123_1.png)]

> あっ　サーブル（※）用の剣だ
> Oh, a weapon for saber*.

> ※フェンシングの標目のひとつ
> *One of the ways to get into fencing

As far as I can tell 標目 isn't a fencing term, or used to designate different fencing events. Armed with my dictionary, I've rendered a translation into something that, as far as I can tell, is as awkward as the original. But my Japanese isn't that good, and I wouldn't be surprised if I'm missing something here.

>>24119
The kanji is 種目.

>>24120

Dang, that's embarrassing. Not the first time it's happened, either.

Correction:

> [9/16 (123_1.png)]

> あっ　サーブル（※）用の剣だ
> Oh, a weapon for saber*.

> ※フェンシングの種目のひとつ
> *One of the events in fencing

Time again already? I will get started.

Still working on this, slowly. I did not get taken by Corona-chan yet.

I think there is a missing dialogue bubble translation here. Page 128.

>>24158

It looks like that bubble just has an ellipsis in it.

I did not feel the need to change the magazine titles since they're just nonsense anyway.
catbox.moe is having issues so I had to find a new file dropper.
https://gofile.io/?c=6us09Y

>>24166

Here are some comments; mostly punctuation, a couple typos, and a little lining.

>>24170
Here is the update: https://gofile.io/?c=ABFxGv

>>24174

It looks like the changes on pages 116_1, 117_1, and 118_1 got lost somehow.

Also:

127_1

In that case, you should be good, but hey- -> In that case, you should be good, but hey— (It looks like the emdash here is like an emdash character at the width of a hyphen. I think what we want here is a hyphen set to 200% width.)

>>24175
The bolding in this font is barely noticeable and the hyphens do look like emdashes. I even bolded the 200% width hyphen so it does not look so thin.
I can give you the PSD if you want to mess with it.
https://gofile.io/?c=3BniqF

>>24180

I think this is good to go.

Thank you for all your work.

Hopefully we can get this admin business figured out in short order and get this released.

Released.