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The flower you only can! -> The flower only you can!
And a few general comments you can probably ignore:
I think the levelling might be a bit strong. Some of the blushing lines on the characters are faded and hard to see compared to the raws, such as on p309.
On p332, you italicized the narrative text, but it hasn't been italicized anywhere else in the chapter. I'm not sure if this was on purpose, so I figured I should point it out. I believe the narrative text in the raws is the same for that page as it is on other pages.
Last thing, I find it odd that "Ichika" doesn't have crossbar I's. There's a bit of conflicting opinion on this, from what I can tell, though. Some sources suggest to only use it for personal pronouns, while others suggest to also use it for names and acronyms (such as CIA, FBI). Regardless, that's a convention more for western comics, so just go with whatever you feel is appropriate.
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Everyone did really great work on this! It was a really nice oneshot. The two of them were both pretty likeable, and the painting reveal was really sweet.
