Here are notes from me on ch 1
it wouldn't hurt to review them, but the one that needs boke input in particular is 26f3. It looks like 26f3 is a repeat of 9f4/5 but it doesn't match. Furthermore, the dialogue from 9f3 doesn't quite fit 26f3 as nicely. Should both spots be updated, and if so, what to?
27f2 should probably match as well