is anyone editing this already? can I try if there's no one?

>>17674
You certainly can.

Let me know if you find the provided raw unsatisfactory in any way.

this is my first time in YP. if there's anything wrong please tell me. :)

https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoMUc2cFJ4VFFpWmM&usp=sharing

>>17677
first, could you zip the the file?
and rename the zipped file: [IN QC] Water's Blue, Sky's Blue

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-NAcy6fcWxocG9PV3AzdHQtR2s/view?usp=sharing

>>17684
here you go~

>>17698
and text shaping
you can read this >>17464

can i attach one image? just a sample... i want to know if its clean enough or not. And about the leveling, I read the guide but i just don't know if its the right level.

>>17711
Sure. Can you upload 141?

here you go...

>>17715

1. Did you use magic wand?
2. Could you upload a 1107x1600 version?

yes. a bit.
here's 1107x1600 version.

>>17720

how bout now?

>>17735

this?
after this shall i start the others?

>>17739

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-NAcy6fcWxoaC1uZXk0STB5MFE/view?usp=sharing

>>17748

@Gulfy
you okay with the placement of "I'll never forget it" on 151?

>>17748

141
You know, I only fall in love with other girls.
"I only fall in love with other girls."

142
If I ever really said that...
If I ever really told them that...

wonder what
I wonder what

Hey!!
Wait!!

Wait!! Don't be in such a hurry...!!
Stop!! Think about what you're doing here!!

143
Don't do stuff you don't have to.
Mind your own business.

Stuff I don't have to!? You were trying to die!!
My own /business/!? You were trying to /kill yourself/!

believed it too
believed them too

I'm not going to kill myself because of some stupid rumor.
->the word "stupid" here should appear as in the original (the white-outlined あほ)

144
->missing sound effect カチャカチャ in panel 2 (it's the sound of her putting away the baby rattle)

Your sister's morning sickness was really bad today, so she's sleeping. Please keep it down!
Your sister's sleeping off her morning sickness. Try to keep it down!

So help us out.
So cooperate.

already decided I have to have a child?
a given that I'm going to have a child?

Why is it strange
Why is it weird

145
fwshhh...
->rotate ellipsis over

Here to watch over me?
Here to stand guard?

->rotate ellipsis, panel 5

School's just such a drag.
School's just too much of a drag.

148
I know it's kind of full of yourself...
I know it sounds full of yourself...

You beat me..
You beat me

151
I'll never forget it.
->This is part of the narration and should be normal size. I didn't translate the magazine chatter.
If it makes it more clear:
忘れない
I'll never forget it.
波の音を聴くたび
Every time I hear the sound of the waves, I'll remember...
あの甘い
that sweetness,
あたたかさを
and that warmth.

I'll finish this. It's been a day and an age since I last worked on yuri here. Btw if a translator wants to finish the rest of this series, I own the tank and would be happy to scan.

>>22605

Not sure if you're still around, but if you do have the raws and are willing to share, there's someone looking to finish this tank.