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Scanned by WeatheredPeach.

http://www.mediafire.com/?3rvek5mu5fazvs9

>> No.21603  

http://www.mediafire.com/file/n8d219bd9hpcgd4/Kage_Shitai_Cleans.zip

>> No.25791  
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More from the bit bucket. Content warning: Surly lesbian, boyfriend heat death, arched eyebrows uber alles.

>> No.25801  

ohhh, I'll edit this and the other ones where I posted the cleans

>> No.25814  

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1IMVz3bUToauXE5EEsf3LKbu1yiFUbBzq?usp=sharing

I think I got the dialogue in the right bubbles. There were also a few missing sfx and handwritten texts, but I filled them in based on context and educated guesses

>> No.25816  

>>25814

Nice! Text seems to be laid out correctly. If there is sfx or text I missed, just point them out.

Page 4 panel 1 "If you miss it the train" --> "If you miss the train"

>> No.25820  

>>25816

Updated page 4

Here are the stuff I added in. If they're already conveyed in the bubble or whatever, I can remove them

page 5, panel 4, bubble 1 - Um,

page 7, panel 1, bubble 1 - Uhh,
page 7, panel 6 (not the last one) - boop

page 18, panel 1, bubble 2 - Uh...

>> No.25821  

>>25820

All good catches. Nice work.

>> No.25838  

>>25820
>>25821

Released.

>> No.25842  

Yay!



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