Hello~
Thanks for editing and good job!
but have some  qc:

general:

>>DUST = needs improvement
bubbles must be VERY CLEAN ; leave no dust
reclean all the pages; remove all the unnecessary specks

>>LEVELING - needs improvement
check every page and adjust your leveling in some pages; some pages are underleveled while some are overleveled

>>EDGES cleaning - needs improvement
http://puu.sh/m3j8a/ef21e620a4.png

> make sure to crop/clean the edges correctly to avoid having some black marks 
e.g. check the bottom left edge
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/comprehensive_tovarisch_ch01#9

and upper right edge 
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/comprehensive_tovarisch_ch01#17


page 3
panels 1 and 2
>>use a different font

the page is a bit dusty because your white is underleveled
http://puu.sh/m3jak/e724bdaedc.png

page 5
white underleveled

page 7
>. white overleveled

page 8
"Like I even..." and "I'm going to..."  "That's enough"
>>increase the font size

"Like I even..." and "That's enough"
-lower them a bit (centering)

page 9 
>>white overleveled

page 10 
sfx:lift 
>>redraw, you didn't fix the window


page 11
"Show me..."
>>increase the font size

>>white - a bit overleveled

credits: stroke the names?