pg57

>top text
comma after "proposal"

pg58

>last panel, floating text
add period

pg59

>panel 1, left text
comma after "visa"

>panel 3, bubble 1
add comma to the end

>p5,b1
Um Carol, -> Um, Carol,

pg60

>p4,b2
comma after "Anna"

pg61

>black box
marring -> marrying

pg64

>p1
doesn't it matter? -> shouldn't it not matter?

pg69

>p3
comma after "I"

pg71

>p2,b1
comma after "say"

>last panel,b2
comma after "USA"
comma after "now"

pg72

>p2,b2
moving -> to move