p03
Untranslated text. "Seesaw Game" "Takemiya Jin"

p05 panel 1
"...wa... / wait...!" These should be aligned more to their corresponding boxes. It may be best to adjust it to something like "Wa... / Wait...!" You can split "Wait...!" like "Wait / ...!" as well.

p08 panel 2
"Let's see Which one is she?" Add some form of punctuation after "Let's see", maybe an ellpsis.

p09 panel 3
"No way? / A prem- / onition / dream...?" -> "No way? / A pre- / monition / dream...?" Move hyphen to syllable break.

panel 4
"Hmm" the two sets of || on either side of the original shouldn't be erased.

p011 panel 1
"You / wanna get / revenge / on that / girl, right?" -> "You / wanna get / revenge on / that girl, / right?"

panel 2
"Wha? It's not that?" and "It's not!" both have mistakenly erased the sets of double lines. I think they're being used here to help frame the text, almost like open bubbles.

p012 panel 3
"You look different[...]" the three lines there are not part of the text and shouldn't be erased.

panel 4
"I'm / sure / you've / forg- / otten / me..." -> "I'm / sure / you've / for- / gotten / me..." Move hyphen to syllable break.

panel 6
"She completely[...]" Framing lines removed.

p013 panel 1
"Whoa..." Framing lines removed. You can also move them to either side of your text to make it fit better.

panel 3
"So w hat can we do..." sweat droplet removed

panel 4
"Like in sports Or Studying or something." period after sports

panel 5
"That's it!!" -> "That's / it!!" and make a bit bigger

p014 panel 1
"Coo- / king" -> "Cook- / ing" move hyphen to syllable break

"Sports / comp- / etition" -> "Sports / com- / petition" move hyphen to syllable break. Same with "Art comp-etition".

panel 2
"And to top it off, she's too cool!" blush lines removed

panel 4
"ka-clunk" make bigger

p015
panel 2
"N..." blush lines removed

panel 3
"So full of yourself!" "Oh, really now?" framing lines removed

p016 panel 2
"Aha!" move subtitle off of original

panel 5
all sets of floating text have framing lines removed

p018 panel 1
"kya" blush lines removed

p21 panel 4
"Ah, I brought[...]" "Wha?" framing lines removed

p022 panel 3
"So she can run[...]" sweat droplets removed

p023 panel 5
"fever.." missing dot in ellipsis

p026 panel 1-2
"Ah..." "I was dreaming, huh..." italicize

panel 5
"I wasn't left behind..." make a bit bigger

p029 panel 3
"...Yeah" missing ending punctuation

p030 panel 2
"Yeah" missing punctuation

p031 panel 2
"Oh? / You two / made up?" -> "Oh? / You two / made / up?"

p032 pnael 2
"irked" framing lines removed

panel 3
"Conti- / nuing / these / ten /  years" -> "Contin- / uing / these / ten / years" Move hyphen to syllable break, remove phantom space.

This entire last section of narration needs rephrasing. It doesn't really make sense currently.

panel 4
"whump" you can rotate this and make it a bit bigger.

p035
"one matcha ice cream please." framing lines removed.