Hey again! There are a few general comments I'm going to make here before getting into specifics later on. Hopefully you don't feel too overwhelmed! The chapter's turning out well, but there are some things that can improved upon, and I think it's best to begin incorporating them early so you have the tools under your belt for later. General: I think the pages are a bit overlevelled, and waifu2x has a tendency to harm screentones. One place you can spot this is on p124, the panel where Miya-chan says "Um... I have one I hope to use...". If you zoom in on her face and compare the raw vs the version we have now, you can see that the light gray horizonal lines are gone, and the darker lines now have much spottier colouring. Here's a guide for the approach I personally use https://docs.google.com/document/d/1APwZ-4GuBOwQ0Tpw6VH_vGh4wyOB9v8mm4Di1g3MbcQ/edit - It's not perfect, but it will preserve the midtones better, while guaranteeing the true black we're looking for and removing the smoothed out jpeg artifacts from Waifu2x. - I'm not sure what happened, but looking at your most recent upload with the schuyguy alts, the levelling issue seems to have been fixed on those pages specifically, but the same changes will have to applied to the rest of the chapter, if you haven't already. I'm also going to be making a few font suggestions this time around. When it comes to sound effects this chapter, I wouldn't recommend going back to change them unless you already have an idea in mind on how you'd like it to be adjusted. However, what I would recommend is keeping an eye out for how the SFX are drawn originally - their shape, size, expression, style, et cetera. As you get a better feel for them, try to pick up more fonts that can replicate the feel of the original work. I think you've gotten a good start on that already. I've linked a set of font sheets you can look through just a bit further on, if you'd like. p121 "The bride and groom are now making their entrance!" - The font used here is okay, but these kinds of motifs with the JP characters looking like they were written with a chisel tip, as well as the more angular bubble edges, are usually done to indicate the voice is coming through speakers, so a font that helps give that impression is usually best. I've always used Comic Geek, as the English speaking motifs for dialogue through speakers leans more toward very square, angular writing, rather than the chisel tip fonts you see in JP. I'm sure there are also plenty of other, possibly better choices as well. Just go with what looks right to you. If you need help finding fonts, this is a pretty comprehensive resource https://imgur.com/a/UmEpOL1. And here's a link to the fonts discord if you need an easy way to find them: https://discord.gg/nrXM6MKQ p122 panel 4 "Uh oh..." - I'd recommend using a handwritten font for this, something that can better replicate the look of the original handwriting. p124 panel 1 "Can I / have you / teach a newbie / the basic / course?" -> "Can / I have / you teach / a newbie / the basic / course?" panel 2 "So, you'll / take me / on?" -> "So, / you'll / take me / on?" This should allow the text to be centered in the bubble better. panel 4 "What do I call you?" - Move up and right slightly. panel 5 "Um... I have one I hope to use..." - Move 3px down and left. p126 panel 1 "So / that's the / normal flow / of things." -> "So that's / the normal / flow of / things." Also, some or all of this sentence was written with caps lock on, judging by the crossbar I in "things" and the weirdly shaped E. panel 2 "Ah! Right! I'm ok! I think..." This can be made a bit bigger. panel 3 "But..." This can as well. panel 5 "Well... Yeah..." Move up slightly panel 6 on 126b specifically "I doubt anyone is going to file one on the spot..." This seems to have been moved down and right a bit, but I think it was better before. p127 panel 3 "We / notice / what they / [...]" -> "We notice / what they / [...]" "That feeling gets their sexual desire going." move up slightly panel 4 "If you can satisfy [...]" move up slightly p129 panel 3 "Saki-san, just in time!" move left slightly panel 5 "Miya-chan, you're up too." "It's a three way." maybe make these 1-2 px larger p130 panel 2 "Well, / I've done / them before, / but today's / is..." -> "Well, I've / done them / before, but / today's is..." panel 5 "She's someone who has [...]" move left slightly p131 panel 1 "But why a three way all of the sudden...?" Should be "all of a sudden". Also move down slightly panel 2 "girl talk...?" move down slightly p132 panel 1 make text in both bubbles slightly larger p133 panel 1 make text in all bubbles slightly larger. enough to feel a bit less empty, but smaller than the bubble below. p134 panel 3 "We can still change you out, ok?" move up and right slightly p135 panel 1 "It's ok... sorry." move down slightly panel 4 "Can I kiss you?" make slightly larger p136b panel 4 "Thank you..." move up and left slightly p137b "...so much" make larger, add punctuation p139 panel 1 "probably was always chasing her shadow," I think this would sound more natural phrased as "I was probably was chasing her shadow," p142 panel 2, 3, and 4 "Yes, that's right..." "I apologize," "after you made that special request and all." "No, that's ok." - All of these bubbles are in the same "voice through speaker" font that's present on the first page. panel 4 "Ah." Hard to catch, but this is in the same font we see on p126 when Miya is speaking nervously. It can also be made a bit larger. p144 panel 1 "Probably was always chasing her shadow." If we change it on p139, I think this should be changed to match.