Chapter 1 translation.

Chapter 2 translation.

Sorry, this one really slipped through the cracks.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/5upxd0i4oh93u5r/YD01ED.ZIP
http://www.mediafire.com/download/yz4kiqx973vlv47/YD02ED.ZIP

Those are downscaled 600 dpi scans, whoever ends up editing it, please check if they are all right. Or ask for the full res, whatever works.

QC please:

http://mfi.re/?plpxvr5exftff9r,wqutiba0d2adjfj

This could be better if someone could help with the cleaning and redrawing.

>>13291
Those scans are good enough to work compared to the public RAW.

>>15943
Chapter 1 QC:

Page 6
I, having faithfully lived the Yuri Life these past many years, will brook no uch slapdashery. =>
I, having faithfully lived the Yuri Life these past many years, will brook no such slapdashery.

Page 10
There was no cause to fret. The manga itself hasn't changed! =>
There was no cause to fret. The manga themselves haven't changed!
(I think this is plural - all manga in YH)

Page 20
It came about suddenly, so I didn't really have time to prepare... =>
And it came about suddenly, so you didn't have time to prepare...

Page 25
A young woman who briefly transfers into an all-female educational establishment, here boosting her Yuri Power, before returning. =>
A young woman who briefly transfers into an all-female educational establishment, there boosting her Yuri Power, before returning.

Missing SFX:
Panel 2 は - Ah

Page 29
Not only I obviously can't never participate in it, =>
Not only can I obviously never participate in it,
(like the original)

>>15943
ch 1

-- is single long dash
/x/ is italics

5
[TOC:]
Episode 1: No Boys Allowed
Episode 2: Karmic Retribution
Episode 3: Delusion is the Domain of the Blind
Episode 4: Banquet of the /Yuri Danshi/
Intermission 1: /Yuru Yuri/ Delusion Chapter
Intermission 2: Yuri Danshi - Girl's Side

6
But
But!

I
//I//
[bold (or larger)]

The truth is contained right here
The truth contained right here

9
Yurihime
/Yuri Hime/

Boy's Love
Boys' Love

ad,
ad;

heady times indeed,
heady times indeed!--

I'll miss it, the
I'll miss it--that

forthrightly
/forthrightly/

10
Miyabi,
Miyabi--

moe
/moe/

Yuri Hime~
Yuri Hime--

11
Be- better
B- better

In this sanctuary.
In this sanctuary...

15
what a trying days
what trying days

16
Be- Be
Be... Be

17
Yuri Hime
/Yuri Hime/

Alright...
All right...

18
meet you a-
meet you a...

~AAAHHHHHH!!
...AAAHHHHHH!!

22
...You don't
You don't...

24
What~!?
What--!?

This's
This is

25
Miyatori Akane~
Miyatori Akane...

28
Saori's nice and soft!
You're nice and soft, Saori!

you are enjoying it.
you're enjoying it!

29
I can't help but wish to touch it!
I cannot help but wish to touch it!

---
Given the volume of references in this series a trivia page along the lines of the Hayate X Blade releases might be advisable. As such:

Page 9
//Richie//: /Yuri Hime/'s Editor-in-Chief, Nakamura Naritarou, is nicknamed "Richie."

Page 17
//Hanadera//: Hanadera is the name of the all-boys school in /Maria-sama ga Miteru/, which Yumi's brother and Kashiwagi attend.

Page 18
//Ichigo Girls' Academy//: Though homophonous, /ichigo/ here does not mean "strawberry".

>>15988
>>15997
Link updated, further QC needed.

>>16334
TOC
->Go with the alternative, I'd say

11
Richie*
Richie

17
Hanadera*
Hanadera

32
Love the aesthetics here, really like what you've done.
The text could be straightened a bit, maybe lose the colons and have both text columns uniform width? (rudimentary MS paint example attached)

note
Notes

[ch 2]
34
Text at bottom: these copyright attributions can be erased whenever they appear. As an internet scanlation, we're obviously outside the realm where copyrights are relevant.

37
"A Secret Place for Just Us Two"!
/"A Secret Place for Just Us Two!"/

Directory of Famous Yuri Scenes
/Directory of Famous Yuri Scenes/

39
Will you listen to it?
Will you hear me out?

40
There's no way that's true.
There's no way she could!

You haven't done anything wrong.
You haven't done anything to her, right?

41
Ah, moo.
Ah, man.

42
having long viewed
having long vied

43
began to drifting
began drifting

sub/dom*
sub/dom

44
...This is...
This is...

45
->typeset the ふっ　("turn") in panel 5

47
->when copyright attributions cover over pictures, as in panel 4 here, they can just be ignored

Kurata Hideyoshi*
Kurata Hideyoshi

48
the truth is
the truth is...

49
glorious thi--
glorious thi...

50
anyone to touch--
anyone to touch...

the most precious
our most precious

51
Impossible.
No, you can't.

It /is/ possible!
I assure you, I can!

63
We- well, ha ha, somehow I just felt like it...
W... well, ha ha... just didn't feel like it today, somehow.

66
note
Notes

"Strawberry Panic"
/Strawberry Panic/

R.O.D.
/R.O.D./

Kamichu
/Kamichu/

Sasameki Koto
/Sasameki Koto/

Yuri Hime S Vol. 11
/Yuri Hime S/, Vol. 11

>>16336
Link updated, another QC needed.

>>15943

ch01 qc